I've seen the draft.
And I want the heron to be more relaxed and distant, after all it is the object not the 'singer' himself.
So I suppose it stand in a different position (not in the middle, and is more far away us) and act like no one is beside it. This picture is more casual, for your reference. http://f.hatena.ne.jp/Tpong/20090705153307
I didn't notice it at all.
Can I take this as a praise？ ：）
You can almost understand what I mean when I use English. But if I use Japanese, you may be totally confused.
It's difficult for me to arrange words into sentences, because I didn't use it in the past few years. (So forget the grammar. :P)
Ah, I think people who love those will be more modest when receiving other advises. So I 'find fault' at you without hesitation.
Can you understand this now?
It is my English that is poor.(It's not my mother tongue.) And, I was supposed to talk in Japanese on this website. but I don't.:)
Don't hesitate to ask if you are confused. (I will try to make myself understood easier.)
I'm so strict because I saw you said "because I'm interested in humanistic, psychology, philosophy and etc" the other day.
So do I.
And I think you can consider other's advice. :) Seems I'm right.
[I became a little unhappy with your straight advice.]
I'm sorry for this. (I will be more tactful next time.)
I had been picked on by my friend for this several times. I really consider the quality (not people's feeling) at the first place. Sorry...